Author Iain Whyte (Iainwhyte)
Creative Commons CC-BY-SA-2.5Image: The Devils' Marvels (here)
the 12 given words:
shore beating blind console classic flame
exhausted outcry name surf sandals boulders
to shore up his depressed state he took a beating
for he was blind to the furor but he was consoled
the idea was to invoke the classic ways of his
forefathers to throw the flames of shame at them
until he had exhausted the barrage of his outcry
only then his name was cleared of any stigma
surfing would then be a breeze without having the
likes of sandals thrown at them which had the effect
of big boulders struck in the face of ignorance
MMT's Sunday's Whirligig #104
Grace's at d'Verse's OLN #192
Excellent use of given words Hank. Well done.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
One's clear name is so important. Even unkind words would feel like boulders.
ReplyDeleteI liked the idea of the "flames of shame" being a form of defense.
ReplyDeleteThe ways humans can humiliate each other are endless.
ReplyDeleteSo many ways for ones name to go through the mud and get stuck indeed
ReplyDeleteOnce again, Hank, you took given words and turned them into meaningful reflection.
ReplyDeleteI have always been amazed by your ability to connect apparently unrelated words into one story - well written. Hope you are well - I have been away from DVerse a long time.
ReplyDeleteWonderful weaving of tale from diverse words!
ReplyDeletethose boulders must be justice. enjoyed it. :)
ReplyDeleteNice use of words.
ReplyDeleteThe idea of 'flames of shame' is quite enticing. Sometimes, it is nice to return the shame that people try to hurl at one's honor.
~ Imelda
The idea of the "flames of shame" being a form of defense is brilliant!
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