Nice construction
One way for immortality.
Stay young forever that way, sorta
Well worded, Hank (a fountain of truth also)
Interesting take on the prompt!
A unique perspective on this story, Hank!
Wonderful Hank, Great to read.Yvonne.
Amazing word usage, Hank.
Well done, Hank.
A well crafted tanka Hank. Nice to read about Dorian Gray in a tanka.
Nice construction
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ReplyDeleteStay young forever that way, sorta
ReplyDeleteWell worded, Hank (a fountain of truth also)
ReplyDeleteInteresting take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteA unique perspective on this story, Hank!
ReplyDeleteWonderful Hank, Great to read.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Amazing word usage, Hank.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Hank.
ReplyDeleteA well crafted tanka Hank. Nice to read about Dorian Gray in a tanka.
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