Attribution: Dietmar Rabich
Image: Labyrinth “Werschrummschloeff” in Berdorf, Luxembourg (here)
High walls moss-laden
Like maze runner stultified
Standing dumb-founded
Beauty is neutral
In eyes of the beholder
Fulfilled desires
Pressure can impinge
But high resolve is savior
To each his own whims
For Chev's CARPE DIEM #853 Mother Earth/Mother Nature and
Kerry's the Eye of the Beholder - micro poetry at Real Toads
short but powerful.
ReplyDeleteHandling pressure ability is a personal asset.
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I like the way you have worked in the 'eye of the beholder' theme. That maze looks like a tight fit.
ReplyDeleteMight be hard to squeeze on through, but can be done if seen the right way
ReplyDeleteExcellent imagery beautiful lines, Hank
ReplyDeleteVery nice work here, Hank. I especially like the middle stanza.
ReplyDeleteIt does look like it's out of the Maze Runner.
ReplyDeleteThere is beauty also in the starkness of a maze... watch out for the Minotaur though
ReplyDeleteMaze runner stultified! Awesome.
ReplyDeleteThe last two stanzas are delicious!
ReplyDeleteExcellent Hank.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Flexibility is so valuable in life! Very good!
ReplyDeleteA mix of emotions for sure. Nature often has that effect.
ReplyDelete:-) lovely Hank. Bastet
ReplyDeletecolorful drama in emotion and imagery.
ReplyDeleteUnder pressure we discover our second selves. Nice pic, wonderful haiku
ReplyDeleteAmazing photo, vivid response.
ReplyDeleteThis made me think which is what I love about poetry...challenges and close calls brings us to wondrous places despite the struggles.
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