Attribution: Daniel Julie
Image: Terraced Rice-fields (here)
Young maiden's first try
at haphazard rice planting
made the willows weep
Care and affections
Ensured fertility for
subsequent seasons
Willows wept no more
Rejoiced at bumper harvest
Cool air winked with smiles
For Chev's hosting at CARPE DIEM #736
- one patch of a rice-field
Sometimes it's hard to tell what will make the willows weep!
ReplyDeleteRice Field
I love how your tie it up at the end
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ALOHA from Honolulu,
ComfortSpiral
=^..^=
A little tlc helps provide for the future
ReplyDeleteamazing one.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful piece!
ReplyDeletethus, all is well that ends well;)
ReplyDeleteThat would be my assessment as well!
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I finally get to plant my garden this afternoon! I'm still a little haphazard with it, like your miaden, but hope to have a good yield :)
ReplyDeleteAJ Lauer
Very nicely written trio Hank.
ReplyDeleteAdore the changing seasons.. Lovely!!
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