Monday, September 5, 2011

A Happening!

Let’s have a ball

A crawlbar for the evening
Hordes of them looking for a good time
It is a happening
At the ‘Bier Keller’

Do not goof it
Do not rack your brains
Guys and dolls
Men and women
Be yourself
Looking fresh
Enticing without a hitch

Like a flower in bloom

No sickos pallid looking
Quivering self
But happy as a lark
Hovering up in the skies
Birdlike
A star studded crowd
No less

Let’s have a ball
I’m game!

Inspired by Sunday Whirl Wordle #20
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16 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2011 at 5:23 AM

    The enthusiasm of an evening out... Your bar poem had a positive slant to it. I can feel the building excitement getting ready for an evening on the town. I'd be game, too, if it were 20 years ago, lol. I'm getting too old for star studded galas. ha! Well done, Kaykuala.

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  2. Pat HattSeptember 5, 2011 at 5:40 AM

    Caught the attention and moment everyone seeks perfectly. Fortunetly its lost all appeal for me now. So I'm not game, all yours..haha

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  3. JJ Roa RodriguezSeptember 5, 2011 at 5:51 AM

    Nice one Pare! Gone are the days that i am up for it almst every night. Now once every two weeks is perfect...

    Enjoy!

    Pareng JJ

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  4. MarySeptember 5, 2011 at 6:16 AM

    This is great! Such a happy wordl, looking forward to a good time!

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  5. Dave KingSeptember 5, 2011 at 6:47 AM

    This is really good, and I do mean REALLY good. The device for including the awkward words was brilliant.

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  6. RHYTHM AND RHYMESeptember 5, 2011 at 6:48 AM

    Different but I loved it, very cleveryly written.

    Yvonne.

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  7. Brian MillerSeptember 5, 2011 at 7:18 AM

    smiles. some fine word play in there...and with words like that you pull this off really well...

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  8. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2011 at 8:11 AM

    A bar poem with an optimistic note; refreshing. Well done. :)

    -Traci B

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2011 at 8:59 AM

    This made me recall my one and only experience of a Beer Keller. Never to be repeated LOL!

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  10. DaydreamerSeptember 5, 2011 at 12:45 PM

    Very nice and energetic use of the wordle words

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  11. jabblogSeptember 6, 2011 at 4:46 AM

    Yes, let's enjoy ourselves:-)

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  12. flaubertSeptember 7, 2011 at 10:28 AM

    Hank, I like the positiveness you brought with the scene.

    Pamela

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  13. Madeleine Begun KaneSeptember 7, 2011 at 9:15 PM

    Really good job with that prompt!

    Madeleine Begun Kane

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  14. gautami tripathySeptember 8, 2011 at 9:04 AM

    Wonderful poem!

    hitching a ride in rusted trails

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  15. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 10, 2011 at 12:51 PM

    Playing ball in the Bierkeller? :-)

    Whirl 20: Kyrie Eleison

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  16. AnonymousSeptember 19, 2011 at 4:26 AM

    Great wordle piece. Thanks for keeping it positive. Sorry I missed this last week. Maybe I saved it until today to start my week with good energy.
    Brenda

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