Sunday, December 26, 2010

The Golden Years



A Balancing Act

We have to meet this way?
Yes!
Every time?
Yes!
Can't we just sit on a bench like everybody else?
Why?
My aching back
What's wrong?
Old age!


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Inspired by Micro Fiction #63
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18 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 27, 2010 at 12:40 AM

    Nicely done. Have a great week!

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  2. Al-ManarDecember 27, 2010 at 3:41 AM

    This is easy enough for me to understand and enjoy it

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  3. AnonymousDecember 27, 2010 at 4:02 AM

    Poor thing :O)

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  4. RHYTHM AND RHYMEDecember 27, 2010 at 4:05 AM

    Something I can relate to but don't want to.

    Yvonne.

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  5. hopeDecember 27, 2010 at 5:50 AM

    Now THAT's funny!

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  6. Brian MillerDecember 27, 2010 at 6:59 AM

    ha. yeah a bench may be a bit more comfortable, regardless of your age...

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  7. PeggyDecember 27, 2010 at 7:02 AM

    Nice and flows so well!

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  8. CherylDecember 27, 2010 at 8:28 AM

    Yep, we do get old. Nice MM. Love the conversational flow.

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  9. ClaudiaDecember 27, 2010 at 8:36 AM

    ah yes - getting older...smiles
    nice one

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  10. Maria@BubblegumandDuctTapeDecember 27, 2010 at 10:05 AM

    that's very funny, too old to stand on a gate. very nice.

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  11. Fay CampbellDecember 27, 2010 at 10:35 AM

    I think that's naughty sweet.

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  12. Charlene AmsdenDecember 27, 2010 at 5:58 PM

    Oh yeah, my back has been killing me and balancing on a fence would be out of the question! Good story!

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  13. kaykualaDecember 28, 2010 at 5:58 AM

    Erik,
    Madeleine,
    Yvonne,
    Thanks and Happy Holidays to All

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  14. kaykualaDecember 28, 2010 at 6:00 AM

    Pakcik,
    MF takes simple words, needn't even rhyme. I enjoy it myself

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  15. Myrna R.December 28, 2010 at 8:10 AM

    This is super cute. And I too can relate to getting older.

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  16. Stafford RayDecember 31, 2010 at 12:22 PM

    Funny and cute. Bad back? Probably 'pigeon chested' too!

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  17. kaykualaDecember 31, 2010 at 4:37 PM

    Myrna,
    Stafford,
    Cutie oldies and pigeon chested? Probably yes!

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  18. kaykualaMay 8, 2013 at 2:52 AM

    Testing

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