A Whiff of Betrayal
A rose by any other name would smell as sweet
Romeo and Juliet, of young lovers
As Shakespeare would have wanted it
A tragedy of sorts that long hovers
Outwardly seen and seemingly oblivious
Of what outcome on unpaved lanes
Isn’t it out in the open , and pretty obvious
Wrought with sorrow and lots of pain!
Cast a blind eye and sadden with laughter
Regretfully betrayed in a web of intrigues
Wild flashes and staccato bursts of gunfire
Enemies within hidden but well in league
Submitted for Thursday Think Tank #28, Smell
Very well said Hank.
ReplyDeletePamela
Most enjoyable to read.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Fantastic!
ReplyDeletePamela,
ReplyDeleteYvonne and
Ninot, Ma'am
Thanks for the visit!
A rose by any other name would smell so sweet~
ReplyDeleteThis was bittersweet; I enjoyed it~
A rose by any other name would smell as sweet
ReplyDeleteHave always loved those lines... and a rose when it smells as it must... no fragrance can compare to it.... or your poem...
:)
Dulce
enemies all around...to take down the rose...
ReplyDeleteElla and Dulce - It has always been. Thanks
ReplyDeleteBrian - Yes, on guard, down it comes!