Author: Basile Morin
Image: Benevolent Cloud Cover (here)
mysterious landscapes
rise and unfold before my eyes
rise and unfold before my eyes
worlds of clouds - Chevrefeuilles
mysterious landscapes
juxtaposed in loud colors
a seeker's secret
rise and unfold before my eyes
astound doubtful minds
enticing scene
worlds of clouds
divine cover for fair-hearted souls
strengths for all those blessed
Bjorn's at d'Verse OLN #280
Chevrefeuilles' at Carpe Diem - a troiku
(only one troiku posted)
I like the way these troikus circle around. I especially like the phrase "astound doubtful minds"
ReplyDeleteSure a scene to entice and strengthen indeed
ReplyDeleteWhen we live just to keep our secrets, we are not truly safe. Safety lies is embracing those colors, filtering as the light is pressed through your clouds. I really like this,
ReplyDeleteReminds me in some was of the lines from the song "Colorful"
"When we live in black and white, our colors fade away."
It's challenging to put those clouds in words. Sometimes our words escape, move fast like clouds. Gotta love a good mystery.
ReplyDeleteI think the clouds brought you to exactly the right place.
ReplyDeleteI like the form and repetition you've used here, Hank, emphasises that mysterious world just beyond our reach.
ReplyDeleteNicely penned!
ReplyDeleteWonderful as always Hank.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
I like the repetition, and this wondrous place.
ReplyDeleteWonderful lines.
ReplyDeleteThe picture looks more like Kyoto than Naran ...