Image: The Resolve to Overcome (here)
the 10 of 12 given words:
rat, message, shadows waving bowl
shredded, stick, text, candles, gone
Rats! the message is clear
Shadows waving incessantly
One gets bowled over
Shredded and abandoned early
Stick to the text
Candles don't work in the cold
Beethoven's wonder can take effect
To stave off hecklers from the fold
Gone the worry so play it cool
Talents make for strong support
It may be cold on the stool
But never discard the gallant efforts
The resolve to succeed
With a winning hand
Will always outlast the limits
To bask in popularity enhanced
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Brilliant use of the words, I felt like I was approaching a stage and trying to shake off the insecurities. Awesome.
ReplyDeleteThis is so heartfelt 💖 I agree, one need only pursue their talent and the rest hopefully will fall in place 😊
ReplyDeleteThe first line made me think of the NYC subway.
ReplyDeleteI really like the penultimate stanza. Believe it, too. Playing it cool and talent are a fantastic mix.
A lot of wisdom in this Hank! Talents do make for strong support. I have always felt that having a creative outlet is very healthy mentally. Love how you made such wonderful usage of the words to!
ReplyDeleteGreat use of the words and art, Hank. Love it!
ReplyDeleteTalent can take one far, as they enjoy and grow.
ReplyDeleteWonderful use of words Hank, one you never discard an honest effort. There is wisdom in these words.
ReplyDeleteIt may be cold on the stool
But never discard the gallant efforts
Loved the poem and how you used the words full of inspiration.
ReplyDelete"Candles don't work in the cold" !! Love that.
ReplyDeleteYour words reflect the energy of the image perfectly.
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