Image Moonlight over the Lake (here)
Brightness rightly true
Moon still holding out before
welcoming new day
Not restraining young lovers'
call for romantic try outs
For Chev's carpe diem's Tanka
Splendor no.13 and
Sumana's at PU's Poetry Pantry
#328
Perfect considering the giant moon this weekend.
ReplyDeleteMuch can happen with two in such a view
ReplyDeleteAnd so it continues
ReplyDeleteWelcoming a new day....very optimistic thought!
ReplyDeleteAah... well it's all about the new try outs ;)
ReplyDeleteAn awesome tanka with a wonderful pivot line.
ReplyDeleteVery uplifting
ReplyDeleteHmmmm. Romantic "try outs" is a new idea for me. You'd think it would be too bright--but moon magic makes up for that. Lovely.
ReplyDeletePS: Thank you for your comment on my poem today.
DeleteOH, the moon is glorious tonight Hank, I am under a spell.
ReplyDeleteNot restraining young lovers'
ReplyDeletecall for romantic try outs..................especially like these closing lines,... fantastic photo too.
We need such hope... we need that new day
ReplyDeleteSadly the moon is but a spectator it has seen all our failings but still makes its rounds.
ReplyDeleteYou never know your luck!
ReplyDeleteLove the sense of hope in this ❤️
ReplyDeletealways the sentinel, silent, yet telling in a large bright way
ReplyDeleteMonday WRites 83 is live
much love...
A wonderful picture to match a wonderful piece.
ReplyDeleteZQ
Nothing much stops young lovers, does it? :)
ReplyDeleteRomantic try outs - I like the idea of that!
ReplyDeleteKind regards
Anna :o]
Very nice tanka!
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