Thursday, September 22, 2016

Looks to be irritable

                                                                                   Attribution: Yorian~commonswiki 
Image: Competing downwards (here)

3WW given words:
irritable jarring infected

A 5-7-5-7-7 Tanka

Body of water
Looks to be irritable
Swirling  like madness
Plunging with jarring effect
Infected with mental ills?

For Thomg's 3WW week #498 and
Chev's Carpe Diem #1061  -  waterfall
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8 comments:

  1. JaniceSeptember 22, 2016 at 12:03 PM

    A very different take on the prompt!

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  2. Jae RoseSeptember 22, 2016 at 12:08 PM

    Could well be - mental ills can certainly feel like an internal storm or two ;)

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  3. Samyuktha Semi JayaprakashSeptember 22, 2016 at 12:10 PM

    maybe it is in the eyes of the beholder. But i see the mad rush too

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  4. Pat HattSeptember 22, 2016 at 12:19 PM

    Could be a little unstable, but then that can be fun

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  5. nashvillecats2September 22, 2016 at 2:37 PM

    Just a few lines but what a message you conveyed.
    Well done Hank.
    Yvonne.

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  6. Wendy BourkeSeptember 23, 2016 at 4:47 PM

    An irritable body of water - I love it - a really different "take" on personification ... inspired! An awesome sketch, Hank.

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  7. J Cosmo NewberySeptember 24, 2016 at 4:39 PM

    Certainly mental illness can look like white water. With rocks.

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  8. purplepeninportland.comSeptember 28, 2016 at 8:13 PM

    Really does look irritable, Hank! Good one.

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