Monday, February 14, 2011

Sulking Lover


Photo image: Courtesy of Susan's Stony River


Make Amends


Hey, young lover
Quit sulking
An apology is in order
Make amends
Call her
Small matter
She'll be thrilled

It's Happy Valentine!




(140 characters)

Inspired by Susan's Micro Fiction #70
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9 comments:

  1. anthonynorthFebruary 14, 2011 at 2:39 AM

    I'm sure she will :-)
    Nice one.

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  2. Lisa Ricard ClaroFebruary 14, 2011 at 2:45 AM

    That sounds like advice my daughter's friends are giving him right now. :) Nice offering for Valentine's Day!

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  3. DeborahFebruary 14, 2011 at 2:51 AM

    Good one, it fits well!

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  4. indicaspeciesFebruary 14, 2011 at 3:00 AM

    Concise, and cute. All's well that ends well perhaps!?

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  5. ninotazizFebruary 14, 2011 at 3:37 AM

    Ahhh, Sulking young lovers ... But they can look oh so dashing!

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  6. PeggyFebruary 14, 2011 at 6:33 AM

    She will be thrilled, trust me!
    Really nice take on the pic!

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  7. DianeFebruary 14, 2011 at 6:36 AM

    A call will make it better, I hope! :O)

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  8. Sylvia KFebruary 14, 2011 at 9:06 AM

    Yes, indeed! She will be thrilled! Take it from me! Great one for the day!!

    Sylvia

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2011 at 3:55 PM

    Who wouldn't love a phone call on Valentine's Day! Good story...I enjoyed it.

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