Monday, January 17, 2011

A Fighter



Photo Image: Courtesy of Susan's


The Odds!

Duel to the death
Air-borne no less
Gravity defied
Choice of weapons denied

Such bravado!
The mark of a Ninja
Battling with an umbrella


(140 characters)

Submitted for Susan's Micro Fiction Monday#66
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11 comments:

  1. Lisa Ricard ClaroJanuary 17, 2011 at 3:46 AM

    Love this! Very clever and creative, terrific word flow. I enjoyed this very much, and you may count me as a new follower. :)

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  2. kaykualaJanuary 17, 2011 at 5:40 AM

    Lisa,
    Thanks for your kind comments and signing in as a follower.

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  3. Sylvia KJanuary 17, 2011 at 6:32 AM

    This is great and definitely very creative! I love it!! Hope you have a lovely week!

    Sylvia

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  4. anthonynorthJanuary 17, 2011 at 6:46 AM

    Cleverly done.

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  5. PeggyJanuary 17, 2011 at 8:12 AM

    You are so clever, I love this!
    Have a beautiful Monday!

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2011 at 1:04 PM

    Great poem!

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  7. AnonymousJanuary 18, 2011 at 12:37 AM

    Great imagery!

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  8. Doctor FTSEJanuary 18, 2011 at 5:13 AM

    I thought at first they were airborne. Nice MFM

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  9. CadJanuary 18, 2011 at 5:49 AM

    "The Flying Samurai" - sounds like a circus act. lol

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  10. R. Burnett BakerFebruary 2, 2011 at 8:32 PM

    "...mark of a ninja, battling with an umbrella." This just tickled me pink! And yet isn't there some heroic truth to that??? Excellent interpretation.

    Rick

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  11. M. RekaFebruary 13, 2011 at 12:48 PM

    Love this. Cleverly done.. :)
    Short Poems

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