Sunday, September 13, 2026

Cinderella -The Glass Slippers Fit?

 
                                                                              Author:Paramount Pictures
Image: Poster for the American fantasy 
film A Kiss for Cinderella (1925)
(courtesy of Wikimedia Commons)

Petrified of her shadows
Pangs of loneliness
affected her health
If only she could trade places

Perhaps being Snow White 
having 7 little friends
No! the jealous Queen will 
look for a new mirror far worse

Hair disheveled dress crumpled
Her memory lingered

I'll be Cinderella in the grand 
carriage then with my Prince in the palace
No! a jealous Queen now aided
by 3 jealous sisters still after her

No. not a Beauty and the Beast
Her winsome beau revered in memory
Marauding thoughts ran wildly
No. not Jack and his Bean
up high a giant shadowing him
No, much less a Frog Prince
nor Ali Baba with forty in tow

Guilt pervaded her mind
If only she brought herself
out of the abyss

She would overcome
Her resolve was determined
No more self pity 

Rommy's at PSU's Friday Writings #244: 
If the Glass Slipper Fits

4 comments:

  1. A wonderful ending to compliment the original! Jae

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  2. No more self pity and with a bit of sanity in the world around.

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  3. Self-pity is never helpful in the end.

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  4. An excellent take on the prompt. The indecision to be someone other than one's own self driven by self doubt and self pity.

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