Author: Magdalena Berny
Image: What are One's Desires (here)
To lovingly dream in wonder
It just takes a little time
Quiet moments of splendour
In some seconds so sublime
Far away let it just wander
In the likes of heaven’s expanse
Surfing's timeless fervour
Akin to a free falling sense
Let the imagination run wild
Big oaks from little acorns transform
A dream being easily profiled
Of wanting's craved for too long
Carrie's at Sunday Muse #240
Love the opening stanza Hank, it draws you right into the piece. Excellent my friend. Happy holiday, and may 2023 bring you peace and possibilities. 🙂✌🏼🕊❣️
ReplyDeleteYou tempt us into a deeper awareness of our creative possibilities. Nice one Hank
ReplyDeleteMuch💌love
I kept reading this; I enjoyed the sense of motion and wonder in the verses.
ReplyDeleteA dreamy poem that pulls the reader in and encourages the reader to dream of possibilities. I am all about dreams, my friend. May your special dreams come to life.
ReplyDeleteHank, she will twist the stem after making her wish.
ReplyDeletewishing you to have
a MERYY CHRISTMAS and a HAPPY NEW YEAR.
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This is one of your finest my friend, and the rhyme is lovely! Wishing you a wonderful Holiday Hank and looking forward to seeing you in 2023!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Carrie. This is definitely one of your best, and the rhymes flow so smoothly.
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