Saturday, December 17, 2022

To lovingly dream in wonder

                                                                                    Author:  Magdalena Berny
Image: What are One's Desires (here)

To lovingly dream in wonder
It just takes a little time
Quiet moments of splendour
In some seconds so sublime

Far away let it just wander
In the likes of heaven’s expanse
Surfing's timeless fervour
Akin to a free falling sense

Let the imagination run wild
Big oaks from little acorns transform 
A dream being easily profiled
Of wanting's craved for too long

Carrie's at Sunday Muse #240

7 comments:

  1. Love the opening stanza Hank, it draws you right into the piece. Excellent my friend. Happy holiday, and may 2023 bring you peace and possibilities. 🙂✌🏼🕊❣️

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  2. You tempt us into a deeper awareness of our creative possibilities. Nice one Hank

    Much💌love

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  3. I kept reading this; I enjoyed the sense of motion and wonder in the verses.

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  4. A dreamy poem that pulls the reader in and encourages the reader to dream of possibilities. I am all about dreams, my friend. May your special dreams come to life.

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  5. Hank, she will twist the stem after making her wish.
    wishing you to have
    a MERYY CHRISTMAS and a HAPPY NEW YEAR.
    ..

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  6. This is one of your finest my friend, and the rhyme is lovely! Wishing you a wonderful Holiday Hank and looking forward to seeing you in 2023!

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  7. I agree with Carrie. This is definitely one of your best, and the rhymes flow so smoothly.

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