Tuesday, March 22, 2022

she is an accomplished pretender

                                                                                                                 Author: anon
Image: Talking Over Tea (here)

the given words:
first light, mirror, rolling fog, tea with Florence,
chemise (a dress hanging 
straight from the shoulders
trumpet, masquerade

in the first light of the agonizing
day mirrored by the misty rolling fog
that transcends slowly 

he is having tea with Florence who is 
dressed in an alluring chemise about the only
saving piece of garment in the drab afternoon 

it trumpets the triumphant efforts  in 
her beau's unrelenting masquerades
which now comes to fruition 

she is an accomplished pretender 
looking happy 
so is he, just as elated
putting up an act himself!

Sarah at d'Verse - colour me poetry

8 comments:

  1. Haha! Really enjoyed this piece Hank! dressed in an alluring chemise about the only
    saving piece of garment in the drab afternoon - brilliant

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  2. This was fun to read and nicely composed! What a shame they both had to pretend!

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  3. Most enjoyable Hank. Loved the read.
    Take care.
    Yvonne.

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  4. I really enjoyed your use of the prompt words. This is actually a tragic story, isn't it?

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  5. Hank, love what you did here! But pretentions don't last long, isn't it.

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  6. Well I hope they have fun with their masquerades.

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  7. Gorgeously worded, Hank!!❤️❤️

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  8. How often people meet and only their facades connect, casual intimacy passes and they go their own way, never really knowing one another. Send in the clowns .............

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