Wednesday, August 2, 2017

its days were numbered

                                                                                          Attribution: R Loy
Image: Dinosaurs in throes of love (here) 

mooching (to borrow without intending to return)
smooch (to kiss)

1. baby dinosaur
then lost in the wilderness
its days were numbered

2. mooching for love
just a little smooch
beating the odds

Note: #1.Is a traditional 5-7-5 haiku 
while #2 as suggested by Chev is to 
be a bit of a progressive, in this case 
4-5-4 haiku

Chev's at Carpe Diem  - #1230 glass sculpture 

10 comments:

  1. Adventure in contrast (and yet...)

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  2. Delightful, Hank, just love your sense of humour!

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  3. Lovely image and blends in well with the thoughts. Greetings.

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  4. A little lovin can go a long way

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  5. A nice set of haiku, and I like that 2nd a lot. I am happy to see you experimenting with this free style idea about haiku.

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  6. I like the storytelling in first, and upbeat character in the second.

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