Monday, January 30, 2017

A desire to correct the ills swirling - a Quadrille

                                                                          Attribution:  Parthenos sylvia-Kadavoor
                                                             -2016-06-25-001" © 2016 Jee & Rani Nature Photography
Image: Peaceful adherence (here)

Resurgence of the startled proliferation of thoughts
Made its presence felt in the hours at dawn-break
What prompted it to show its ugly head
but the desire to correct the ills swirling

Outright jitters in the lot affecting choices
that impinged on human liberties
(44 words)

For Bjorn's at d'Verse -  a Quadrille #25
and to include the word -  dawn
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12 comments:

  1. CloudiaJanuary 30, 2017 at 4:25 PM

    but the desire to correct the ills swirling!

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  2. nashvillecats2January 30, 2017 at 4:41 PM

    How well I know ill thoughts when I should be asleep.

    Excellently written Hank.

    Yvonne.

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2017 at 4:54 PM

    Good the thoughts emerge with a need to correct wrongs...

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  4. Alex J. CavanaughJanuary 30, 2017 at 6:39 PM

    Sometimes it takes getting ugly...

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  5. brudbergJanuary 30, 2017 at 9:17 PM

    If only it would work - if only

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  6. Pat HattJanuary 31, 2017 at 5:03 AM

    Sometimes one has to go beyond to get the job done

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  7. Rosemary Nissen-WadeJanuary 31, 2017 at 5:14 AM

    I think there will be many with those jitters at this time.

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  8. Sanaa RizviJanuary 31, 2017 at 6:39 AM

    Powerful write!!

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  9. Paul John DearJanuary 31, 2017 at 11:10 AM

    Let's hope there are many with the desire and will to correct the ills swirling.

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 31, 2017 at 2:53 PM

    "Outright jitters..." - and the media. Well said

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  11. Bekkie SanchezFebruary 3, 2017 at 11:17 AM

    Bravo!

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  12. GraceFebruary 4, 2017 at 2:19 PM

    My favorite part of the day is dawn-break ~

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