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- each stanza equals one sentence.but broken into 3 lines and
- the poem as a whole should add up to 18 lines of 6 stanzas.
We Wordle #16: All the 39
words are used:
leg squat insect spring starving
truth heart air radio laugh yes but
when licking spongy cat gentle
wallow wind blue tree draw
picture silver knot weight corner
life small kids rides heart wails
party magic rust sky silent forever
Not able to squat, standing
on my legs truth be told and no
insect is to spring a surprise
Starving my heart out with
the radio blaring on the air
it is a laugh, yes!
But when it comes to licking
and 'milking' it is as spongy and gentle
as to a cat to wallow in the wind
Try to draw a picture so blue of a tree
a silver mare, my mom and small
kids at a party raucous in a corner
Knotted life rides a weight in the
heart to wails of waifs enjoying
the magic of breast feeding
Not here as the quiet rustic sky above
bears witness to a peaceful and silent mode
for feeding time with Mom is a joy forever
Miskey's We Write Poetry We Wordle #16 and
Helen's Talking with animals at Real Toads
truth heart air radio laugh yes but
when licking spongy cat gentle
wallow wind blue tree draw
picture silver knot weight corner
life small kids rides heart wails
party magic rust sky silent forever
Not able to squat, standing
on my legs truth be told and no
insect is to spring a surprise
Starving my heart out with
the radio blaring on the air
it is a laugh, yes!
But when it comes to licking
and 'milking' it is as spongy and gentle
as to a cat to wallow in the wind
Try to draw a picture so blue of a tree
a silver mare, my mom and small
kids at a party raucous in a corner
Knotted life rides a weight in the
heart to wails of waifs enjoying
the magic of breast feeding
Not here as the quiet rustic sky above
bears witness to a peaceful and silent mode
for feeding time with Mom is a joy forever
Miskey's We Write Poetry We Wordle #16 and
Helen's Talking with animals at Real Toads
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Wonderful! This is such a fun form to play with, too. Thanks for joining in, Hank.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful picture Hank. Also a verse so well written I read it a couple of times.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
Yvonne/
Spongy cats! Funny description. I guess fat cats are spongy.
ReplyDeleteYou blended all the words together well.
we tried breast feeding...it was hard on my wife....and we did what we could...
ReplyDeletenice rhythm in your words hank....
a lot going through his head... reminds me of a curious child... also, like how Brian used the word "we"... LOL
ReplyDeleteHappy for the kid, may not be so happy for the mom if they bite or yank a bit lol
ReplyDeleteAt first the mere explanation of the form and the list from the wordle scared me, but once I got past this the poem is exquisite! Nice write!
ReplyDeleteinteresting and tough form, would like to try it.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem - good work with the words given.
ReplyDeleteI kept thinking as I was reading this, you would have been a huge success at my poetry class last fall. Awesome talent.
ReplyDeletethis is so beautiful Hank....and i like "a cat to wallow in the wind"...an interesting form too....
ReplyDeleteQuite impressive to work all those words into the poem. I've not tried this form, but it looks like it would be fun.
ReplyDeleteHank, thanks for the intro to the form. You worked it well and made me want to give it a try.
ReplyDeleteInteresting form Hank, will have to try my hand at it nice work.
ReplyDeleteOoh, I like the "quiet rustic sky"! :)
ReplyDeletevery cool, Hank ~
ReplyDeleteI learned Literature and when I come here, I learn more from you, Hank. Much thanks for sharing your creativity. :)
ReplyDeleteLove the form, love your poetry!!!
ReplyDeletehow interesting, i've never tried that poetic form
ReplyDeletemuch love...
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Beautiful and the way it should be for every animal, safe and nurtured. Cool form.
ReplyDeleteSuch peace and beauty in your words...as Sherry spoke...too bad every animal can't feel safe and nurtured.
ReplyDeleteIt feels as if these words just fell so gently into place.
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