Tuesday, April 15, 2014

None Are Aware!

                                                                                     Attribution: Jon Sullivan
Image: Not many aware of what bees do exactly

NaPoWriMo: #14 The Prompt:  To write a poem
comprising questions except for the last line
A to Z Challenge: #14     N for None Are Aware

What life has to give?
What soul has bared it all?
What of the moon?
Is it so delicate that cries its heart out?
Can the wind not extend its helping hand?
Is mankind so helpless?
Is mankind not concerned?
Is man so distanced from it all?

What’s eating him?
What is he ranting about?
Anyone knows how he got here?
None are aware?
And all of you are clueless?

Is he the same guy?
The one dating the beautiful lady next door?
The lady who had left town for good not many days ago?

No wonder he has gone bonkers!

For NaPoWriMo and A to Z Challenge 


  1. Excellent verse Hank. Loved the read.

  2. we def often jump to conclusions without trying to know the back story...there is usually a reason for everything....

  3. haha bonkers can be a fun place to go. We always try and make up something to explain things.

  4. To rant or not to rant
    Better than feeling like a plant
    Or a bee when there's no honey
    Um that's wrong
    Need to get some facts straight in my song

  5. he was to busy, or buzzy, to notice she had bailed before it was too late, I guess ~