Friday, August 29, 2014

Frigid blue but looking white - Tan Renga

                                                                                                   Attribution: Ariold
Image: Aniwaniwa Falls NZ  (here)

in the pond
reflected trees and drifting leaves
- autumn’s last show                                 Suzanne's
New season’s colors seen
Frigid blue but looking white                     Hank’s

in the pond
reflected trees and drifting leaves
- autumn’s last show                                 Suzanne's
Slowly making an exit
Prospects of White Christmas due            Hank’s

Note: Tan Renga  - To add to Suzanne's
haiku of 5-7-5 with one's own 7-7

For Chev's CARPE DIEM Tan Renga Challenge #48
Suzanne's 'autumn's last show'

9 comments:

  1. Most cleverly written and that picture really beautiful.

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  2. A new season of color is always enjoyable

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  3. Hank, that is a great picture and your words fit magically...

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  4. Can keep the snow at your show haha don' like those prospects

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  5. frigid blue but looking white...
    nice capture of the inbetween of seasons in that
    a brief fall before winter

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  6. your continuations are astounding ! its like '' come what may , i will enjoy the seasons'' type of message ! cold winter...but we are here to welcome you / Frigid blue ..Prospects of White Christmas due...! wow !

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  7. Hard to choose which of the two are the better .. each are interesting in their own way. I might choose the second ... love the idea (theoretically anyway) of a White Christmas! Bravo a great take on this callenge.

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