Friday, August 15, 2014

Extending its reach beyond

                                                                                 Attribution: Nevit Dilman
Image:  A Wing Icon (here)

Aboard wings of gold
Extending its reach beyond
Bridging the distance

Wings so delicate
Bear the weight of man’s folly
Just partial success 

Destined for success
Stay ahead with wings to fly
Crowd trailing behind

For Chev's CARPE DIEM #540  -  wings

10 comments:

  1. What an excellent verse, wonderful to read , your message reaching the reader.
    Well done Hank.
    Yvonne.

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  2. We just need enough life to carry us above the crowd.

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  3. Get away from the masses and soar away

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  4. i love the last one... destined to win!!

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  5. Wheels UP!


    ALOHA from Honolulu
    ComfortSpiral
    =^..^= . <3 . >< } } (°>

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  6. great haiku .. we need to reinforce those wings :-)

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  7. Wings of hope.. a beacon for us all.

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