Tuesday, May 6, 2014

Unsteady movements

                                                                          Attribution: US National Archives
Image: The Resident Cat having its fill (here)

Unsteady movements
Awareness slowly lost in
time and directions

Slurred sounds mouth dribbling
as saliva and speech mixed
A torture to speak

Night of boozing, stoned 
struggling to go home, wisdom
too late in coming

Celestine is hosting at CARPE DIEM with prompt - stone

10 comments:

  1. Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm sometimes in real life too anyone can snoop clear below our nose, clever kitty!!

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  2. Another successful night just as chosen?


    ALOHA from Honolulu
    ComfortSpiral

    =^..^= <3

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  3. Hank, this is a unique take on the prompt. Very creative and a sad reality. Thanks for participating!!

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  4. I was watching a show the other night where some folks think Merlin was an ancient alien... there are many sides to the same story :)

    Clever cat. Clever Hank. Thanks for stopping by my place.

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  5. ugh....that wisdom too late can be deadly...i have been there though at a much earlier age.....

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  6. Yeah not a fun experience at all, wisdom needs to stay on when it comes to that

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  7. Once you realize you've had too much, you're past that point.
    I wonder if Pat has ever let Cassie take a sip?

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  8. Stone , from a different perspective...very well done with the prompt :-)

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  9. Get to that point and it is all down hill

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  10. Wisdom.... I'm still waiting to get my share, Hank!

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