These are great!
How we try to interpret the inscrutability of felines.
Those cats are hard to convince.. We much rather have them go for mouse and rats, but they have to for the little birdies.
a joy to read both of them...nice use of 'jumble'...
Haha! Perhaps but mouse is wise too. Either way it will be a challenge for the cat, Hank.That 140 controlled characters is a challenge I think.
I love these two pieces..and the image! un-jumbling the jumble can bring rewards ;)
I think a mouse would be easier to catch,smiles ~
Loved both the pieces - altogether exquisite :D
fun pieces - I enjoyed the tone of both!
You can find treasures at jumble sales sometime... Enjoyed your creativity in these words.
I like the second, with the persona and voice of the Cat. Funny. Thank you for your commentary on today's poem.
Love the jumble of the two when read together
To think we salvaged you from the jumble sale... I think that's what my Mom said when she found me.....P.S. Guess who's in my show today.
Had had a peek#1 looked slickHank
It was a massive task. I tell you I won't be doing anything like that for at least a year.
Can well imagine. The graphics especiallyBut it would have been a great experience reallyPat must have employedsomeone to helpTo rightly soughtto go to great depthWell doneFor taking the plunge!Hank
A massive task, but with spectacular results..amazing there Blue..
lol the mouse would be less jumping, fun one. Never know what you can find from junk either
The voice of the cat was great
These made me smile, especially the cat's musings!
Another sunday smile. ThanksZQ
(◕‿◕｡) enjoyed these; have a good Sundaymuch love...
Wonderful image and fun short verse!
Lovely, Hank! I love the impressions you make about what the cat would have thought in there. And I like the pic you shared too. Thanks for a most enjoyable read today!
Awesome! Witty and fun! I enjoyed these two verses, Hank!
haha - the second one made me smile..the cat better stay away from my birdie.
These were a fun read! I wonder which would be easier to catch, the bird or the mouse?! I also like the pic too :)
A great write Hank, most enjoyable to read.Yvonne.
I really enjoyed these, quite amusing.
You have a wonderful talent for crafting stories out of 140 characters :D I had no idea that there was a site out there that did 140 character poetry. It's my new obsession! Do you share any of these gems on Twitter?
No Rose, Even though 140 characters is meant for Tweeter.Hank
The second one really made me chuckle :)
Ha, how important to complete make-over at the right time... so to be able to spy the important someone...here's connection! Great, Hank! :)