Saturday, December 20, 2014

Great mood for all concerned - an Essence

                                                                                               Attribution: Erik Cavarra
Image: Perfection even in training (here)

Essence:
Essence, created by Emily Romano consists of two
lines of six syllables each.  There is an end rhyme
(rhyme at the end of the line) and an internal rhyme
(rhyme in the middle of the line)  -  mlmm

Golfer's Desire

Golfers pray all the time
Good play when weather’s fine


Yuletide cheer

Santa gave good presents
Great mood for all concerned

For Georgia's BJ's Shadorma and beyond  -  essence 
at Mindlovemisery's Menagerie  (mlmm)



7 comments:

  1. Good presents are great and a hole in one is fine too I bet

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  2. Pray and curse, I think. But, you've made a hole in one on the essence.

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  3. I love them both...I think you could even add for the golfer they play even in bad weather:)

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  4. Really had to smile at the golfer -- nicely done! :)

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