Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Divine


                                                                    Picture by Petr Kratochvil
Image: Red Tulips, divinely dignified 
Picture Source: Random free pictures from Public Domain Pictures.net (here) where you can find more pics by Petr

Pretext to forgive
To err an onslaught to good
sense. Feigned to please

Disturbed divine light
Cavorting in sinful acts
Squirming in darkness

Sensed life’s tortuous ways
Divine wisdom called upon
to right paths of sin

Written for  Brian's dVerse's OpenLinkNight #61 and  Haiku Height’s  September Heights Day 11 P# 170 with prompt – divine

23 comments:

  1. Nice triplet Kaykuala, especially the third one is my favorite. Great job.

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  2. Such paths can take a ton
    To right under the sun
    But with enough work
    Surely can do it with a smirk

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  3. A lot going on here. The ying/yang of it all. Nice write!

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  4. i like the turn to recovery from..there is a nice grit in the middle stanza, but there is rescue as well...

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  5. A great write Hank.

    Thanks for the comment I received with pleasure.

    Yvonne.

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  6. I think the light when disturbed does seem to flail here and there...

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  7. There is truly something divine in nature isn't there. Tulips are a beautiful flower too.

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  8. very well done ...really enjoyed the middle stanza as well...

    disturbed diving light..

    bkm

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  9. I like the calling for divine wisdom ~

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  10. I'd venture to say that 99.9% of the human race knows what it's like to be cavorting in sinful acts!

    Divine

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  11. These sort of all tie up and balance, Hank--I love the idea of tulips as divine, as well, full of that light you're talking about.

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  12. Hank, life is all about the ying and yang, isn't it? Nice write and I love the pic.

    Pamela

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  13. Any pretext to forgive is good for either side! (And some squirming sin isn't always so bad either!) k.

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  14. I love where you put the line break in this part:

    To err an onslaught to good
    sense

    It works very well!

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  15. A succinct and nicely packaged write. Well done.

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  16. Wow, these are deep, kiddo. Love the format - you packed a ton of meaning into these lines.

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  17. Yes, this I like. It all gels and has the smack of truth.

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