Friday, July 18, 2014

Cherry Blossoms but what a wonder!

                                                                                          Attribution:  Arria Belli
Image: Cherry Blossoms in Japan (here)

the old-lady cherry
in bloom: a remembrance
of her old age                                -   Basho's
given it was a fleeting
moment but what a wonder!           -  Hank's

the old-lady cherry
in bloom: a remembrance
of her old age                                -  Basho's
blossoms of pure whites refreshed
all to be young hearts again             -  Hank's


For Chev's CARPE DIEM Tan Renga Challenge #43
Basho's 'the old lady cherry'

5 comments:

  1. love that second one...the cherry blossoms are so beautiful...and i love standing in their petal rain....

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  2. Bringing life anew to be young once more, be nice if we could all do that

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  3. I like both of your continuations Hank, but that second continuation is just a diamond a masterpiece. Thank you for sharing.

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