Friday, July 4, 2014

To herald color's freshness! - T. Renga

                                                                                       Attribution: Jonathan Billinger
Image:  Early Spring Flowers  (here)

before the spring equinox;
the cold will last
only a night or two more           -  Rotsu
           
then nature transforms where birds
and flowers discard shyness        -  Hank's


before the spring equinox;
the cold will last
only a night or two more           -  Rotsu

cold winter soon forgotten
to herald color's freshness          -   Hank's


Note: To complete a Tan Renga to
Rotsu's haiku with additional 7-7 lines

For Chev's CARPE DIEM Tan Renga Challenge #42
 -  before the spring equinox


8 comments:

  1. Lovely photo and wonderful tan renga ~ thanks, ^_^

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  2. nice...love that first one...the personification of the flowers with their shyness...

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  3. Flowers bloom and winter is gone with its snowy doom, works for me at my sea

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  4. Those are a colorful completion to the haiku by Rotsu. You added into the freshness and beauty of spring in your words. Nicely done.
    -HA

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  5. Beautiful! Love the discarding of shyness.

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