Saturday, July 26, 2014

Not dampened by rain or shine - a shadorma


Image: Courtesy of Bastet's  (here)

a shadorma comprised six non-rhyming lines
and the syllable pattern is 3-5-3-3-7-5

corner spot
hidden from view and
a likely
hideaway
not dampened by rain or shine
lovers' paradise

a couple
with sustained feelings
extending
a grain of
profuse logic striving hard
for recognition

For Mindlovemisery Menagerie -  Photo prompt above

8 comments:

  1. A nice little hideaway to getaway, perfect spot

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  2. A place to get away from it all. Great photo.
    Yvonne.

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  3. You got all that from the photo - great imagination, Hank!

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  4. it is nice when you can find those little spots in the world...where you can tuck away...and just be in love....smiles....

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  5. Immediate while classic - then your own ending of thought. It Works!



    ALOHA from Honolulu
    ComfortSpiral
    =^..^= . <3 . >< } } (°>

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  6. Lovely take, I really enjoyed your shadorma you used the prompt very nicely.

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