Sunday, September 15, 2013

A Luminous Luminary (MF)

                                                                                Image: Attributed to Pat
Image: Courtesy of Grandma's

Luminous luminary
of a sports personality
Jump specialist he'll be
To sharpen his prowess,
plain to see
At a young age
he's starting early!

(140 characters)

Grandma aka Linda at Grandma Goulash's Succinctly Yours week #130 extended
Pat's photo above. One is to create a Micro Fiction (MF) of  not exceeding 140
characters and to include luminous as the word of the week


  1. I'm liking your poem, Hank. More athletes than not start early.

  2. Well done, Hank

    ALOHA from Honolulu
    Comfort Spiral
    =^..^= <3

  3. In India there's saying that 'Poot kay paon palnye mein nazar aajatye hain' (A kids capabilities can be seen in early childhood days.)

  4. The best athletes usually start young. You've phrased that so poetically.

  5. I echo others' comments...Kids show their athletic talents early! That's my youngest son, Tim, when he was about 8. He grew up loving soccer and now, at age 30, he still plays occasionally with friends in the nearby park. In this shot he was doing the long jump.