Friday, June 21, 2013

Rainy Season

                                                                                  Attribution: Andre Karwath
Image: Primulas
Courtesy: Wikimedia Commons (here)
Note: The image may not jive with my offering but it looks cool!

Apologies: On the road for the weekend. Will return comments in time

the rainy season
a paper lantern in hand
I walk along the veranda

of opportunity lost
never so lonely

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the rainy season
a paper lantern in hand
I walk along the veranda

thinking of good times before
how I crave for more

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the rainy season
a paper lantern in hand
I walk along the veranda

knowing I captured her heart
am walking on air

Written for Chev's CARPE DIEM The Tan Renga Challenge #3

8 comments:

  1. hopefully along the way you find some opportunity found as well...like that walking on air...smiles. travel light this weekend sir...hitting the road in the morning myself...

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  2. Hopefully the air is fair and you push through with ease with a nice breeze

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  3. Lovely work, Hank! Travel safe!

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  4. Good job Hank ... three nicely completed Tan Renga, but that third tan renga is awesome ... thank you for participating.

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  5. my fave is the 3rd, too....uniquely romantic....

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  6. just loved the way you associated all possible emotions with rain..

    Superb as ever !!

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  7. Walking on air... after that meeting per chance... such romance here... Unique

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  8. The last one is just so lovely--very beautiful set of haiku!!

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