Friday, August 28, 2015

plumage strikingly open - a tan renga

                                                          Attribution: Myloismylife - LOKE SENG HON
Image: Peacock in the Park (here)

peacock struts proudly
plumage strikingly open
park's beauty enhanced          (Hank)
where the waters flow afar
the village glows with sweet plum flowers       (Anon)

blessed be the souls there
for a town with a river
floods yes, there were but       (Hank)
where the waters flow afar
the village glows with sweet plum flowers       (Anon)

For Chev's CARPE DIEM
Tan Renga Challenge #97


10 comments:

  1. Nice! Flooding does have its purpose.

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  2. A great and delightful piece to read. Greetings!

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  3. Water does help, even in flooding at times. Peacocks can be quite cocky too

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  4. Flooding will always arise and it has its purpose

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  5. enhanced with beauty are both of these tan renga. great painting with words, Hank. Happy weekend

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  6. nice take on the renga ... bravo Hank! Bastet

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  7. Well penned ! love the prologue !

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  8. Interesting choice of imagery to complete the Tan Renga - has me fixated on the colors of the blues and greens - linking in my mind - to the water.

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