Friday, September 12, 2014

breeze through lightly

                                                                                           Attribution: Andy Mabbett
Image: Bright and Colorful Chrysanthemums

Words are to follow the given sequence:
mirror leaves rain butterfly chrysanthemum
breeze stars clouds ocean daisies cow shed secret

strong mirror shine strikes
leaves replica wrought with show
of rain images

butterfly seeks safe
refuge on chrysanthemum
to breeze through lightly

stars above dark clouds
glitter over ocean’s waves
like evening’s daisies

flowers bright vibrant
colorful and well nurtured
a cow shed secret

For Chev's CARPE DIEM  Full circle #3 -  mirror

11 comments:

  1. A secret within the cow shed huh? Not sure I want to step in there lol great use of all the words

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  2. Nicely done, kk. I like how the third poem uses two key words on one line which gives you freedom in the subsequent lines. Clever.

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  3. Cleverly done Hank , most impressed.

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  4. A great response to the prompt :)
    The cow shed secret made me smile -- and the stars glittering like daisies is just wonderful.

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  5. The third one ... truly beautiful.. and of course I'm curious about those secrets in the last one.

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  6. Yes, the third is quite nice.

    Looks like your butterfly survives.
    I'm afraid mine didn't

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  7. I specially like the second and third verses ~ Lovely chain of words Hank ~

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  8. I hope the next "circle' gives the secret away. :)
    Yours seems like a colorful one

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  9. Well done indeed a great full circle of haiku Hank.

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