The wayward painted wickedly with his mind
Evident in the nature of weird stiff forms
He wandered off in
shadows of designs
The wayward painted wickedly with his mind
Pitching its right in the wealth of creation
Emblazoned hues of kaleidoscopic abundance
The wayward painted wickedly with his mind
Evident in the nature of weird stiff forms
Submitted for d'Verse FormForAll - Triolet
ha nice hank...this to me captures well the mind of the artist...the shadows of designs and wealth of creation...nice...
ReplyDeleteAs Brian noted, a good evocation of the artistic sensibility.
ReplyDeleteSweet!
ReplyDeleteAh, the wicked mind of the painter, how well it fits this - and many another bill! Well done.
ReplyDeleteFrom the elation of the mind
ReplyDeleteComes the creation one will find
Got to hand it to you, the weirdness comes out, even in this traditional form. nice job using it to depict a different state of consciousnesd.
ReplyDeleteI used to spend a lot of time in the art world! Knew several painters of that ilk! K.
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool, how you captured a painter in the poem. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThe question is, though, did he paint something wicked with his brush? Ha.
ReplyDeleteha i agree with bri and sam... love how you capture the artistic mind hank
ReplyDeleteWow, Hank, this is wicked!
ReplyDeleteK
Very original--I like the way your mind works here, Hank. It feels like you might have had something specific in mind when you wrote this--a work of art, I mean.
ReplyDeleteHank, you have definitely mastered the form. Nice!
ReplyDeleteAn interesting form, nicely written.
ReplyDeletemind plays tricks... especially of an artist.
ReplyDeleteLovely read !!
Interesting. What wickedness goes on in the mind of the wayward to form such stiff abundance?
ReplyDeleteYes....And thank you.
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