Image: Sarolta Ban
Image: Courtesy of Tess' Magpie
The look in your eyes
Young lass you are at high risk
Piercing eyes can kill
Right in the middle
Surveying the horizon
Through a middle road
Worry not but strength
Pitting your sensuality
Nicely done, loved this haiku-like verse.
ReplyDeletei think many might find them selves skewered by the danger that lies in those eyes...smiles.
ReplyDeleteNice take Pareng Hank!
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
Yes look in those eyes and run away
ReplyDeleteIf you want to live to see another day..haha
Strength in the middle road! I like that! :)
ReplyDeleteOh, yes, Hank. Looks can kill.
ReplyDeleteK
Looks can kill...sometimes a sweet death :) nice work!
ReplyDeleteReally good. Succinct and well thought-out.
ReplyDeletenice!
ReplyDeleteWander
http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com
And who's the weaker sex here? Hard to say! K.
ReplyDeleteAgh! I didn't mean to be anonymous! That last comment was me, Manicddaily! I enjoyed the poem! K.
ReplyDeletenice one, eyes can deff kill!
ReplyDeleteExcellent Hank!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Wonderful haiku. My husband always comments on my ability to give scary looks, so I especially related to your haiku.
ReplyDeleteThose are some powerful eyes, all right.
ReplyDelete=)
ahhh, the Triku
ReplyDeletewell spun....which sex is weaker?
and weaker than what?
Peace ☮
Awesome Haiku
ReplyDeleteYou captured the danger in the magnetic draw of those eyes.
ReplyDeleteWatch out...
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