Sunday, March 4, 2012

Eyes Can Kill

                                                                      Image: Sarolta Ban
Image: Courtesy of Tess' Magpie

The look in your eyes
Young lass you are at high risk
Piercing eyes can kill

Right in the middle
Surveying the horizon
Through a middle road

Worry not but strength
Pitting your sensuality
Mind the weaker sex

Haiku inspired by Magpie #107

19 comments:

  1. Nicely done, loved this haiku-like verse.

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  2. i think many might find them selves skewered by the danger that lies in those eyes...smiles.

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  3. Yes look in those eyes and run away
    If you want to live to see another day..haha

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  4. Strength in the middle road! I like that! :)

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  5. Looks can kill...sometimes a sweet death :) nice work!

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  6. Really good. Succinct and well thought-out.

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  7. nice!

    Wander

    http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com

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  8. And who's the weaker sex here? Hard to say! K.

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  9. Agh! I didn't mean to be anonymous! That last comment was me, Manicddaily! I enjoyed the poem! K.

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  10. nice one, eyes can deff kill!

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  11. Wonderful haiku. My husband always comments on my ability to give scary looks, so I especially related to your haiku.

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  12. Those are some powerful eyes, all right.

    =)

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  13. ahhh, the Triku

    well spun....which sex is weaker?
    and weaker than what?

    Peace ☮

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  14. You captured the danger in the magnetic draw of those eyes.

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