Interesting take... love where you have gone with this one.
ha. yeah i dont mind as long as it runs either...break down and ask me to fix it we will be in trouble...lol
Seen as one double haiku or as two, equally effective - and affective. Fine post.
Short but the message is evident to see,Have a good day.Yvonne.
Both good takes on the pic :)
haha...This is very nice and it is so much me in it!
..omit the 'A' in the first line to remove the excess count of syllables in your Haiku.. anyhow.. with or without it doesn't actually reduce the power you raised in your Haikus.. i like 'em both but my vote goes to the first one... not because of the 'A' but rather the allegorical meaning you hid inside those very lines.. exquisite!(:Brightest blessings!~Kelvin
Nice and to the point. I like where you went with the prompt.
as long as it runsbeautiful poem
'change the timing chain' .. applies to so much more than auto engines. I enjoyed this!!
LOL, my sentiments exactly. Nice.
Made me laugh. Haiku seldom does that to me. Good work!— KKay, Alberta, CanadaAn Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
I agree about car engines! As long as it runs when I turn the key, that is sufficient!
They don't bother me, either, if they run.