Sunday, November 13, 2016

Welcoming a new Day

                                                                              Attribution: Vomirencostard
Image Moonlight over the Lake (here)

Brightness rightly true
Moon still holding out before
welcoming new day
Not restraining young lovers'
call for romantic try outs

For Chev's carpe diem's Tanka
Splendor no.13 and
Sumana's at PU's Poetry Pantry
#328

20 comments:

  1. Perfect considering the giant moon this weekend.

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  2. Much can happen with two in such a view

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  3. Welcoming a new day....very optimistic thought!

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  4. Aah... well it's all about the new try outs ;)

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  5. An awesome tanka with a wonderful pivot line.

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  6. Hmmmm. Romantic "try outs" is a new idea for me. You'd think it would be too bright--but moon magic makes up for that. Lovely.

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    1. PS: Thank you for your comment on my poem today.

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  7. OH, the moon is glorious tonight Hank, I am under a spell.

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  8. Not restraining young lovers'
    call for romantic try outs..................especially like these closing lines,... fantastic photo too.

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  9. We need such hope... we need that new day

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  10. Sadly the moon is but a spectator it has seen all our failings but still makes its rounds.

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  11. Love the sense of hope in this ❤️

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  12. always the sentinel, silent, yet telling in a large bright way

    Monday WRites 83 is live


    much love...

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  13. A wonderful picture to match a wonderful piece.
    ZQ

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  14. Nothing much stops young lovers, does it? :)

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  15. Romantic try outs - I like the idea of that!
    Kind regards
    Anna :o]

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