Friday, November 11, 2016

just an interlude


                                                                Attribution: Diego Castillo Morales
Image: Fun nights  (here)

gracefully moving
right on with a fling
young hearts enjoying fun nights
having it so good
just an interlude
not restrained daintily light

set in somber mood
group of destitute
abundance of snow flakes float
crave for apple pie
set to satisfy
cold nights' desire a hope

Note: an alouette of a
5-5-7-5-5-7 syllable count
with rhyme scheme of a a b c c b

Gayle's MTB at d'Verse
with a new form -  alouette 

9 comments:

  1. Hank, so happy you rose to the occasion at trying the form...wonderful work. Love the images of the interlude through the dance and youthful happiness to apple pie and snowflakes.

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  2. A great piece Hank, well done.
    Yvonne.

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  3. Satisfying cold nights with a little interlude can be a win indeed.

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  4. I would also love myself some apple-pie... nights are so cold right now

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  5. Wow. Love the shift of perspective between the 2 stanzas.

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  6. I like the contrasts between the two stanzas.

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  7. I love the rhythm of this piece Hank!

    mlm

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