Thursday, November 3, 2016

Jubilance where love fulfills - a Tanka

                                                                                         Author: Sérgio Valle Duarte
Image: Coolness of Rain-drops (here)

3WW given words:
erratic calculate dire

Erratic rain storm
To calculate the distress
factor of dire straits
needs to know wilful effects
of solving the mystery

In dire need of
jubilance where love fulfills
but erratic calls
dampens the joy of having
rain to calculate coolness

For Chev's Carpe Diem Tanka
Splendor #3- rain with mystery and depth
Thomg's 3WW week #504


  1. Sometimes too much rain isn't the best even when it is needed.

  2. three words
    two ideas
    One well put together thought