Monday, January 30, 2017

A desire to correct the ills swirling - a Quadrille

                                                                          Attribution:  Parthenos sylvia-Kadavoor
                                                             -2016-06-25-001" © 2016 Jee & Rani Nature Photography
Image: Peaceful adherence (here)

Resurgence of the startled proliferation of thoughts
Made its presence felt in the hours at dawn-break
What prompted it to show its ugly head
but the desire to correct the ills swirling

Outright jitters in the lot affecting choices
that impinged on human liberties
(44 words)

For Bjorn's at d'Verse -  a Quadrille #25
and to include the word -  dawn

12 comments:

  1. but the desire to correct the ills swirling!

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  2. How well I know ill thoughts when I should be asleep.

    Excellently written Hank.

    Yvonne.

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  3. Good the thoughts emerge with a need to correct wrongs...

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  4. If only it would work - if only

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  5. Sometimes one has to go beyond to get the job done

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  6. I think there will be many with those jitters at this time.

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  7. Let's hope there are many with the desire and will to correct the ills swirling.

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  8. "Outright jitters..." - and the media. Well said

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  9. My favorite part of the day is dawn-break ~

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