Saturday, May 2, 2015

Proudly standing unflinching!

                                                                                               Attribution: '64 Laitche
Image: Mount Fuji (here)

Misty showers play
against the distance's visuals
Mount Fuji subdued

Regal snow-capped tops
Proudly standing unflinching
Japan's great mountain

Undaunted presence
Solitary yet somber
Pride of Eastern skies

For Chev's CARPE DIEM #718 Misty Showers
with Basho's take on Mount Fuji

11 comments:

  1. Yes...though not Japan's sole mountain! Very nice though

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  2. Standing tall and watching over!! great write.

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  3. One spot where anyone can sure sit and take it in while pondering away

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  4. It is the pride of Japan. I saw it as a kid (lived there a few years) and would like to go back and see it as an adult.

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  5. Proud and beautiful! Very fitting poem.

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  6. the most iconic, certainly. It's the snow-capped top that does it.

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  7. Beautiful imagery and sentiment.

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  8. wonderful to visualize the mountains of mountains.

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  9. Beautiful visions Hank .. fine haiku. Bastet

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