Nice verse!Madeleine Begun Kane
beautifully captured.. loved the theme Flourish :)
Lovely way of projecting disappointment and having a positive approach too in the end!!
A good way to deal with disappointment
Disappointment comes in many forms.Yvonne.
sometimes that is all it is...tough luck...which we should not allow to get us too down as we have little control over that...
It happens..and its alright.. I liked the way you have expressed.. the thought..
Sometimes the things we plan with a flourish just don't flourish!Things That Flourish Here and Here and Here
this was lots of fun to read! you should check out my poetry forms page there are Asian form on it that have a small rhyme scheme like what you did here and they are lots of fun to play with!
I like the positive ending of your poem... nice use of word florish...It was a challenge for me.
Nicely written...loved the the heading itself "Tough Luck" ;)
Plans never go as planned :) Good positive end..
Nice poem - you might want to correct a spelling mistake with the word disappointment though :)