Sunday, September 4, 2011

So It is!

Tough Luck!

Do you make it out
We planned it with such flourish
It was such a dish

But disappointment
It came with no such relish
How I had so wished

It cannot be helped
Things are such they  would just miss
Providence it is!

Inspired by Haiku Heights with prompt #63  'flourish' and 
Poetry Pantry #65

14 comments:

  1. beautifully captured..
    loved the theme Flourish :)

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  2. Lovely way of projecting disappointment and having a positive approach too in the end!!

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  3. A good way to deal with disappointment

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  4. sometimes that is all it is...tough luck...which we should not allow to get us too down as we have little control over that...

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  5. It happens..and its alright.. I liked the way you have expressed.. the thought..

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  6. Sometimes the things we plan with a flourish just don't flourish!

    Things That Flourish Here and Here and Here

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  7. this was lots of fun to read! you should check out my poetry forms page there are Asian form on it that have a small rhyme scheme like what you did here and they are lots of fun to play with!

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  8. I like the positive ending of your poem... nice use of word florish...It was a challenge for me.

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  9. Nicely written...
    loved the the heading itself "Tough Luck" ;)

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  10. Plans never go as planned :) Good positive end..

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  11. Nice poem - you might want to correct a spelling mistake with the word disappointment though :)

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