Don't fly too close to the sun... Well voiced!
I agree with SweetTalkingGuy :) LOL!!Eider down pillows are really very soft but warm!! Nice idea for the prompt word !!
feathers of all sorts, but to pillow my head for sure just dont fly too close to the sun...
Icarus got it wrong, you got it right.
Ah, good for you! I wondered if someone would remind us of the Icarus tale.Featherless Pomegranate
Fly too close and you will roast.
They say it all Pareng Hank.. You got it right... Nice one!Pareng JJ
:) Hey, whr r other two stanzas...?? well, nice pic..
Nice one.. its the stuff of things ~
Pramoda,There's only one haiku. The last line is purposely separated to give effect to Icarus plunging to earth.Hank
Good words, loved it.Yvonne.
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Wow! I haven't thought of Icarus for awhile. Well, since the wax on his feathers melted. Thanks for dropping by my nook. I appreciate it.
Oooh. I like this. I think they way you separated the last line worked perfectly for the "anticipated" end of this story. Wonderful.
Curt's allergic to feather pillows!
Wow great subject for poetry "Icarus plummets" great last line!
Nice picture... and yeah.. don't fly too close to the sun :)