Sunday, September 25, 2011

The Phoenix


Photo Credit: Google images

A Bird

An image so clear
Emerging from the ashes
With wings wide apart

Extending its reach
Smoothness over the divide
Reaching out to watch

Fully satisfied
Extending its commitment
Over the masses

Inspired by Haiku Heights #84

11 comments:

  1. nice...really like that last verse...

    ReplyDelete
  2. true.. birds give u tht feeling :)
    well composed !!

    ReplyDelete
  3. For me, this ticks all the boxes.

    ReplyDelete
  4. Phoenix... a wonderful bird... The myths related to it are even more beautiful :)
    Lovely post :)

    ReplyDelete
  5. Always liked Phoenix lore, nicely done with your tour. Unless its dark Phoenix taking over Jean Grey, that just doesn't make my day..haha

    ReplyDelete
  6. I love birds, I love this verse. Thank you for sharing.

    Yvonne.

    ReplyDelete
  7. i like how you powered this with the gerunds emerging and extending.

    ReplyDelete