Tuesday, September 27, 2016

Wisps of your hair caught the wind - a Quadrille

                                                                            Attribution: fineart-photos.tumblr.com
Image: I swear it was you! (here)

Sheltered under the red parasol
Wisps of your hair caught the wind
Lined them across my face 
Amid soft giggles from you 

Gave me a jolt to find you gone
Sweet memories a constant companion now
Shadow of you but I see in everything
(44 words)

Note: Shared an umbrella
in a slight drizzle and her
long tresses were flailing
in the soft breeze

MLMM's Photo Challenge #132
De at d'Verse -  to write a quadrille
and to include the word -  shadow

16 comments:

  1. Those soft giggles becoming shadowed is such a sad memory...

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  2. Always there once ingrained in one's mind.

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  3. This is deeply sad. But what a gorgeous image left behind.

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  4. Lost love - you'll see her everywhere now.

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  5. I can't do that about my lost love, you see he was bald.Seriously though Hank this was beautifu; to read.
    Yvonne.

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  6. Ah yes, those memories - some good and some not.

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  7. This is sad as it is with lost love Hank ~ Good to have that sweet memories as companions ~

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  8. Poignant and beautifully penned ode to a lost love.

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  9. I love the framing of the red parasol and the wisps of hair amid soft giggles - makes it even more poignant.

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  10. you saved that moment for anytime you wish!

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  11. Ah, that moment of togetherness is never truly gone...

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  12. A heart wrenching contrast, from love and laughter to sadness and loss, beautifully rendered.

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