Thursday, September 22, 2016

Looks to be irritable

                                                                                   Attribution: Yorian~commonswiki 
Image: Competing downwards (here)

3WW given words:
irritable jarring infected

A 5-7-5-7-7 Tanka

Body of water
Looks to be irritable
Swirling  like madness
Plunging with jarring effect
Infected with mental ills?

For Thomg's 3WW week #498 and
Chev's Carpe Diem #1061  -  waterfall

8 comments:

  1. A very different take on the prompt!

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  2. Could well be - mental ills can certainly feel like an internal storm or two ;)

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  3. maybe it is in the eyes of the beholder. But i see the mad rush too

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  4. Could be a little unstable, but then that can be fun

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  5. Just a few lines but what a message you conveyed.
    Well done Hank.
    Yvonne.

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  6. An irritable body of water - I love it - a really different "take" on personification ... inspired! An awesome sketch, Hank.

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  7. Certainly mental illness can look like white water. With rocks.

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