Thursday, October 17, 2013

Spur of the Moment

                                                                              Attribution: Broken Sphere
Image: A 1929 Auburn Speedster
Source: Wikimedia Commons (here)

Spur of the moment
Release of a spark varied
In circumstances

Dare graze the bumper
of the speedster in front, a
road bully  transformed

Enduring moments
of ecstasy but next a
monster suddenly

Crying for a fix
Wayward son swiped the meager
earnings of poor dad

Written for Chev’s CARPE DIEM #325 with prompt  - release
# 301 - spark

16 comments:

  1. Although I don't have a car I did get your verse. Well done.
    Yvonne.

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  2. Sucking away the earnings, a car can surely do that

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  3. Extra-ordinary take on release ... I hadn't thought that I would read haiku (senryu) about a car, but I like it.

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  4. ah but perhaps the prodigal will come home
    and all will be forgiven eh...on the road people can def
    change in an instant...smiles.

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  5. unique take on release in your haiku ~ well done ~ thanks, carol xx

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  6. Different paths can show at any moment

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  7. Go Daddy-O !


    ALOHA from Honolulu
    Comfort Spiral
    =^..^= <3

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  8. Wayward sons often need to be cut loose so they can learn to swim on their own!! Nice !:)

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  9. quite a variety
    i like the play on spur

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  10. What a clever piece-liked it:-)

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  11. Words and picture in perfect harmony!

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  12. many a time I have been swept away by glittering chrome and the sweet aroma of hot oil... :)

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  13. Great poem! I really enjoyed the image the line 'road bully transformed' created.

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  14. With a car like that ... some release indeed.

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