Wednesday, March 22, 2017

morning of softness

                                                                                          Author: Martin Falbisoner
Image: Rolling sea-water (here)

lazy ocean waves
right from where it emanates
trancends emotions

startlingly cool mist
caressing soft rosy cheeks
morning of softness
light breeze trespass alongside
but never a dull moment

setting a warm mood
rustling leaves bidding a share
love is in the air

For Chev's Carpe Diem #1177-
Hafiz's morning breeze

7 comments:

  1. A breeze full of love can sure be grand

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  2. Three in one. Independent, yet stronger together. Very clever

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  3. I like the way you've sandwiched the tanka between the haiku, Hank - the misty breeze between the ocean waves and rustling leaves - you've captured movement in each of them - and ended on a romantic note :)

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  4. Well done Hank, this reminds me of my days at the beach,

    Yvonne.

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