Monday, November 18, 2013

Inner Feelings of Self



                                                                                         Attribution: Vmenkov
Image: Searching for  the Inner Self
Source: Wikimedia Commons (here)

tickling ivories
scintillating music sound
filling the inner soul             -    Carol
exudes strains of lingering
make-up soothing the being

tickling ivories
scintillating music sound
filling the inner soul             -     Carol
impinging on rough diamonds
hoping few will turn out gems

Written for Chev’s CARPE DIEM Tan Renga  Challenge month # XIX 
building on Carol's haiku 'tickling ivories'

12 comments:

  1. Let's hope!


    ALOHA from Honolulu
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  2. nice...i rather like the hope for transformation in that second one hank.....

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  3. gotta luv that call of hope, nice completions both

    much love...

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  4. That second Tan Renga is really beautiful Hank.

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  5. A little hope can go a long way and maybe a gem will be there one day on display

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  6. a gem already....very nice completion....

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  7. There's always the hope that diamonds in the rough will somehow become lustrous!

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  8. Powerful completion with real insight to the haiku and very enlightened soul you are ~ thanks, carol, xxx

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  9. Loved the completion laced with hope:-)

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  10. it is good to have hope - really like the second set. thank you.

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