Author: Ahmed Anfal
Image: Eventually Made up (here)
starts rather innocently
but lashed with fury
Provoked and enraged
stormy union knows no bounds
unwittingly worsened
Both not giving in
Saying sorry to water it down
hardest to do
Endearment tormented
Rantings eventually pacified,
but was normal and laughed off
(44 words)
De Jackson at d'Verse quadrille-180-
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"All's well that ends well" a passing storm. Egos and fear cause so much trouble :(
ReplyDelete"stormy union knows no bounds" is a great description of two stubborn minds and hearts at battle.
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Excellent poem!
ReplyDeleteThis hits close to home.❤️
ReplyDeleteGreat poem, Hank!
ReplyDeleteReally nice Hank, it must have been hard making the Senryu sets into 12 lines and 44 words exactly, yet keeping the syllable counts correct. GOOD JOB!!
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